I thought I had
been doing well with A Marriage of True Minds. It had a characters I
enjoyed, a plot that mostly made sense and the ending wrapped things
up nicely. It was good to go to my trusted reader. Then it came back
to me full of notes. “More transitions, more action, fill in
between the dialogue.” And she was right. It was easy for me to see
how everything fit together because the story lives in my head, but
for someone else it wasn't as easy to see what the characters were
doing and the reactions to the words being said. So, it has been
revised again and soon it will be ready to see the world. Next week,
I will have the first chapter up and you can let me know if it's
something you'd want to keep reading.
